We are delighted to announce the top three stories from October’s entries are (in alphabetical order):
- A Child’s Scent
- A Windy Day
- Victor’s Treats
Narrowly missed out:
- A Memorable Birthday
- Something’s Afoot
The three top stories will now go through to the final judging and the top ten prize-winning authors (not necessarily the same as the top ten stories as no author can win more than one prize) will be announced at the 2019 BeaconLit literary festival on Saturday 13th July.
If your story for this month isn’t listed in the above three, you are welcome to do whatever you like with your submission hereon in. If your story is listed, it’s possible that it could be placed in the ultimate top ten* which will be published on this website (and on http://www.beaconlit.co.uk) next July so please do not send it elsewhere until after the literary festival.
If you have requested, and paid for, critique, this will be with you in the next few days.
Morgen’s feedback on the stories received this month:
A smaller number of submissions than the first two months (ten vs. seventeen and eighteen, working backwards to August) but still a tough job. Yes, I know, all judges say that but it only actually takes two really good stories, or for this competition four, and the battle’s on. Sometimes it comes down to the closeness to the theme so apart from sending your best stories, do make sure they’re as relevant as possible. We can often tell when you’ve tailored something to fit rather than seen the prompt and thought, “Ooh, I know…!”
Following the reading of these stories, I thought it might be useful to provide some tips:
- Check your spelling. This sounds obvious but misspelled words (in this case one of the character’s names) does lose marks where it’s a careless oversight.
- Punctuation, however, in competitions doesn’t really matter – unless it’s terrible and that can be forgiven as unaware but it’s up to the individual judge. In speech the comma or full stop comes before the closing speech marks or inverted comma.
- This won’t show when you’re submitting in the online form but in a normal document… where there are characters thinking, the thoughts should go in italics (rather than speech marks or inverted commas) so it’s clear it’s not narration or speech. Also we only think to ourselves so you don’t need any ‘to himself / herself’.
- Technically, ‘now’ is present tense so it would normally be removed or changed to a past-tense alternative. Dialogue is present tense so they’re fine in speech.
Although Morgen judges on the impact of the stories and the quality of the writing, it’s always disappointing when there are simple spelling mistakes or even simpler errors that should have been picked up during the editing process. Please do read your stories carefully before submitting and ideally show them to someone you trust for their opinion.
*Should you get through to the longlist of 30 stories (three per month over ten months), it doesn’t necessarily mean that your story won’t be chosen if it slips out of the top ten. No author will appear in the top ten twice so a story that came eleventh (or twelfth, thirteenth…) could be bumped up where there are author duplications.
And now you can also receive feedback on your story / stories at £5 per story with the optional critique service (given by the judge, Morgen Bailey, who is a professional editor for publishers and independent authors). This option is detailed on the main 500-word Competition page with an option to select critique within the entry form.
All the money from this competition goes to BeaconLit funds for the local libraries. Morgen is not charging for her time. Good luck!